10天搞定托福寫作
想要短時(shí)間內(nèi)搞定托福寫作要怎么做呢？下面小編給大家分享一些方法。
十天搞定托福作文
托福寫作避免生搬硬套，要把學(xué)到的句式和詞組靈活運(yùn)用到自己的寫作當(dāng)中去!這樣，寫作的分?jǐn)?shù)自然也就提高啦!
增加過渡段：
A1 好。。。
A1 好，而且 A2 好。(這個(gè)“而且”，可以用科技發(fā)展啊技術(shù)進(jìn)步啊之類的擴(kuò)充)
A2 好。。。
14 條萬能理由：
與事物有關(guān)：效率、方便、經(jīng)濟(jì)、耐久、安全、空間。
與人有關(guān)：健康、樂趣、成就、性格、情感、交流、經(jīng)驗(yàn)、他人。
理由的安排也要有邏輯順序—首段要雕琢，要表現(xiàn)!
1、排比反問：
Have you ever been to the West Lake in Hangzhou City? Have you ever walked along the Long Corridor in the Summer Palace? Have you ever seen the red fallen leaves on the Fragrance Hill?
If you have never had such experiences, you would never know how much fun outdoor activities could bring you.
2、背景知識(shí)式：
With the development of science and technology, more and more companies (including international companies and small companies) are founded, but there are not enough people to
take these positions. So a large number of working opportunities are provided to people who are still teenager students.
In some countries, some people think if teenagers do a job while they are still studying in school, it may have a bad impact on their grade. Others consider that teenagers
should have jobs while they are still students. As far as Iam concerned, I agree with the latter.
Because teenagers can learn amount of useful experience through working and they think through the job they will acquire some knowledge of how to get a good relationship with others.
3、定義式：
Technology refers to skills, knowledge, and techniques thathuman beings use in their daily life and work. As everybodymay find, technology develops day by day. How does the development of technology affect our life?
Many people hold the opinion that it is due to the development of technology that human beings have access to the comfortable modern life. On the other hand, a number of people are always aware ofall kinds of destructive influence of the technological development on us. As far as I am concerned, the development of technology does far more good than harm to people’s happiness.
正文部分每段安排：
1~3 行 主題句
4~8 行 細(xì)節(jié)論述
1~2 行 主題再現(xiàn)
主題句的要求：
1、要有概括性：
Eg -. When I work in daytime, other people are also working, so I can work more efficiently.
Eg +. Outside environment during daytime helps to promote efficiency in many ways.
解說： TS 一定要概括， 不要寫成反例那樣那么細(xì)節(jié)， 不然后面的話不好展開了。
2、避免絕對化：
Eg -. Elder people are efficient.
Eg +. Compared with many un-experienced young people, most experienced elders can work more efficiently.
解說：正例表述得體，尺度很好，有限定成分“most”，有對比說法“compared with”等。
3、避免語法和用詞錯(cuò)誤。
細(xì)節(jié)論述部分：
1、個(gè)人事例推廣到一般：(圖書館有錢該買書還是買電腦)
During the last semester, all the twenty students of my class are required to resort to the British Encyclopedia to complete our final paper.
However, there was only one set in the whole library because it takes a whole shelf to hold and is too expensive to purchase more than one set. Ever since the university bought in the CD version of the British Encyclopedia, we are free to refer to the same article at the same time through different terminals.
This case is not rare, in reality, frequently many readers of the library need to refer to the same source at the sametime.
2、反例：(still 圖書館)
Paper books in the library circulate very fast. Frequently we find a good book lose its good shape within 3 months. Those seldom-borrowed books are not safe at all, in danger ofnatural erosion and worm bites.
解說：不好說電腦好存放的時(shí)候，就說書不好存放。
舉反例要適可而止，不能指望全篇用反例來支撐自己的觀點(diǎn)。
3、具體數(shù)據(jù)和引用權(quán)威：
想得4分以上必須注意， 因?yàn)?分要求說服力，5分要求appropriateexamples。
Eg.My hometown used to have one million acres of forests. The town people are shortsighted as to sell trees for $10 per piece. Trees are sold at a rate of approximately 100 thousand pieces per year, according to the data from the government.
Professor Selephant from Peking University, one of the bestuniversities in Environmental Engineering, once said, the tress in my hometown will disappear within 10 years at thisspeed of lumbering.
倒數(shù)第二段讓步：
Eg.Admittedly, books do have certain advantages over computers. They are easier to carry with, lower in unit price, and more energy efficient given that computers are driven by electrical power.
However, computers have more valuable merits as an efficient, durable, manageable means for libraries of the new century. I therefore reinforce my standpoint to choose computers as my final choice for the investment.
解說：讓步之后一定記得重申 anyway 我還是堅(jiān)持 X 觀點(diǎn)。
五步幫你搞定托福高分作文
第一、鞏固托福語法。
建議看賴世雄的“托福高分語法”;此書不長，可在10天年看完一遍。此書的功效是可讓菜鳥在10天內(nèi)領(lǐng)會(huì)必要的托福寫作文法及閱讀中遇到的文法問題，如長句子的分析?？赐甏藭?，你會(huì)認(rèn)為自己的英語水平提高了一個(gè)階梯，不僅僅是作文方面。
如果沒有此書的，偶已經(jīng)上傳了，在最下面可以找到，但是不要著急，等看完了這篇文章再下載也不遲。
第二、加強(qiáng)托福單詞的熟悉程度。
背托福單詞建議用王玉梅的單詞表(excel版)，其實(shí)，每個(gè)不同的單詞表版本都不完美，比如大家背單詞的進(jìn)程不一樣，對同一個(gè)單詞的理解能力及熟悉程度不一致。建議自我完善下載下來的單詞表。另外，有人認(rèn)為，背完單詞也就完了，該復(fù)習(xí)其他部分了，可以完全不用再背了。其實(shí)，偶不同意這個(gè)觀點(diǎn)，根據(jù)人的遺忘規(guī)律，當(dāng)時(shí)記得再牢的詞語，過一段時(shí)間都會(huì)忘掉一些。復(fù)習(xí)IBT不是一天、兩天或幾個(gè)星期能搞得定的(除非牛人)，大家需要從一開始背單詞一直支持到考試前一天，就算到后來一天看一點(diǎn)，也比不看強(qiáng)。
關(guān)于此表的用法：偶按照楊鵬記憶法的規(guī)定把王玉梅的詞匯表分為21個(gè)lists，就在表里最前面一列。大家可以根據(jù)楊鵬記憶法結(jié)合玉梅詞匯表操練。偶背了不到半個(gè)月已經(jīng)背完，而且不易忘，非常有效!
前兩點(diǎn)是基礎(chǔ)。如果具備這兩點(diǎn)的朋友，你們可以進(jìn)入第二階段的練習(xí)——熟悉范文。
第三、建議看托福高分范文。
有些人在看托福范文的時(shí)候太過于注重好詞好句，反而忽略了ETS對學(xué)生最主要、最重要的要求就是文章結(jié)構(gòu)及論點(diǎn)和論據(jù)好壞與否。ETS的考官不在乎你的觀點(diǎn)是反對呢還是贊成，或prefer哪一個(gè)觀點(diǎn)，他們所在乎的是你的文章結(jié)構(gòu)清楚與否，包括觀點(diǎn)是否明確，對比是否宣明;在乎你的論點(diǎn)是否支持你的觀點(diǎn)，論據(jù)是否有力。
偶在此最主要的就是談?wù)撐恼陆Y(jié)構(gòu)及如何寫好論點(diǎn)，展開論據(jù)。
第四、托福作文要觀點(diǎn)明確邏輯性強(qiáng)
基于T 友們具有了豐富的詞匯和語法的基礎(chǔ)，寫句子已經(jīng)不是什么難事。但是，如何寫好觀點(diǎn)明確、邏輯性強(qiáng)及對比宣明的好文章，一是和個(gè)人知識(shí)及想象力的多少有關(guān)，例如，It has recently been announced that a new movie theater may be built in your neighborhood. Do you support or oppose this plan? Why? Use specific reasons and details to support your answer. 你家附近將要建一個(gè)電影院。你同意還是反對，詳細(xì)闡述支持你看法的原因。
有些基礎(chǔ)知識(shí)欠缺或者想象力不豐富的朋友，只會(huì)想到——1，反對，為啥?太吵，人多;2，另一些人支持這個(gè)觀點(diǎn)，為啥支持?方便，近。他們在幾分鐘能想到也就這么多了。如何提高想象能力呢?在短時(shí)間內(nèi)我們也無法提高很多，但是我們可以用一些常規(guī)的思維去思考——連鎖想象法。例如，如果反對此觀點(diǎn)，電影院能讓我們想到什么不好的地方?從修建開始想——破壞綠化，如果它建在咱們附近原來是草坪的地方呢?在施工的時(shí)候有很多噪音、污染環(huán)境等等問題;從建好后想——人來人往，太嘈雜，剛開張時(shí)，說不定有什么慶?；顒?dòng)，人群擁擠，影響舍區(qū)的安靜，還有很多很多大家都可以用這種連鎖法想到。如果贊成的，方便，只需走路就可以看電影了;從走路又想到，節(jié)約路費(fèi)及想到如果在上下班高峰期看電影的話，就可以避開人多的公共交通工具了。。。另外，有了電影院，除了可以看電影幫助消費(fèi)者，另外可以有打工的機(jī)會(huì)，如賣票，小吃部工作——幫助學(xué)生補(bǔ)貼boards。這些觀點(diǎn)不外乎就是關(guān)于環(huán)境、社會(huì)關(guān)系、交通、學(xué)生、經(jīng)濟(jì)等等。
第五、熟記托福范文
在每次練習(xí)寫托福作文前，看幾篇和你想寫的命題相關(guān)的范文，記一些例子和句式;另外，注意看范文里論點(diǎn)和論據(jù)是如何展開，以及寫作思維，對比一下你自己的寫作思維。 在寫的時(shí)候一定要卡時(shí)間，超過30分鐘就不要寫了，反過來再看范文，對比一下。如果你沒有寫完，沒有關(guān)系，總結(jié)經(jīng)驗(yàn)最重要，分析一下為什么沒有寫完，是因?yàn)閱卧~拼寫耽誤時(shí)間了，還是想不出來論點(diǎn)如何展開。多數(shù)人犯的是第二個(gè)問題，這個(gè)一是需要時(shí)間練習(xí)，二可以根據(jù)偶提供的辦法解決。
大家在審?fù)觐}后(花2分鐘想一下2-3個(gè)論點(diǎn))，把想到的論點(diǎn)在電腦上列個(gè)提綱。先把第一段，最后一段寫完，及第二、三或四段的首句寫完——首句就是論點(diǎn)，每段的body都是圍繞這幾個(gè)點(diǎn)來。如此，既防止寫不完的情況發(fā)生，又不會(huì)寫偏題——因?yàn)槟阍趯懯拙涞臅r(shí)候已經(jīng)檢查了和主題一致與否。把整個(gè)框架打好(在此申明，這個(gè)不是托福模板，模板太死板，雖然有它的好處，但是模板不能fit每個(gè)不同的命題)，再來想論據(jù)去支持論點(diǎn)。 這一點(diǎn)就看個(gè)人的功底了。如果字?jǐn)?shù)夠了，沒有犯過大的語法錯(cuò)誤，無論文章內(nèi)容豐富與否，至少不會(huì)低于20分了。 托福作文字?jǐn)?shù)最好控制在320-450之間，太多或低于300都不好。太多的話，除非你寫得很到位，字字珠璣，否則有流水賬之嫌。建議大家多精練句式和邏輯思維。句式不一定要很復(fù)雜，如很多從句之類的，這里指的是地道的英語表達(dá)方法; 文章中最好簡單句兼插從句。精練句式有助于咱們提高寫作水平和質(zhì)量，不在乎寫得多少，只求寫得精及準(zhǔn)確與否;邏輯思維可幫助我們很快的展開論據(jù)支持論點(diǎn)，有條有理，讀者讀著心情也舒暢。
搞定新托福寫作五步驟分享
第一、鞏固語法。
建議看賴世雄的“托福高分語法”;此書不長，可在10天年看完一遍。此書的功效是可讓菜鳥在10天內(nèi)領(lǐng)會(huì)必要的托福寫作文法及閱讀中遇到的文法問題，如長句子的分析?？赐甏藭?，你會(huì)認(rèn)為自己的英語水平提高了一個(gè)階梯，不僅僅是作文方面。
第二、加強(qiáng)單詞的熟悉程度。
建議用王玉梅的單詞表(excel版)，其實(shí)，每個(gè)不同的單詞表版本都不完美，比如大家背單詞的進(jìn)程不一樣，對同一個(gè)單詞的理解能力及熟悉程度不一致。建議自我完善下載下來的單詞表。另外，有人認(rèn)為，背完單詞也就完了，該復(fù)習(xí)其他部分了，可以完全不用再背了。其實(shí)，偶不同意這個(gè)觀點(diǎn)，根據(jù)人的遺忘規(guī)律，當(dāng)時(shí)記得再牢的詞語，過一段時(shí)間都會(huì)忘掉一些。復(fù)習(xí)IBT不是一天、兩天或幾個(gè)星期能搞得定的(除非牛人)，大家需要從一開始背單詞一直支持到考試前一天，就算到后來一天看一點(diǎn)，也比不看強(qiáng)。
關(guān)于此表的用法：偶按照楊鵬記憶法的規(guī)定把王玉梅的詞匯表分為21個(gè)lists，就在表里最前面一列。大家可以根據(jù)楊鵬記憶法結(jié)合玉梅詞匯表操練。偶背了不到半個(gè)月已經(jīng)背完，而且不易忘，非常有效!
前兩點(diǎn)是基礎(chǔ)。如果具備這兩點(diǎn)的朋友，你們可以進(jìn)入第二階段的練習(xí)——熟悉范文。
第三、建議看高分范文。
有些人在看范文的時(shí)候太過于注重好詞好句，反而忽略了ETS對學(xué)生最主要、最重要的要求就是文章結(jié)構(gòu)及論點(diǎn)和論據(jù)好壞與否。ETS的考官不在乎你的觀點(diǎn)是反對呢還是贊成，或prefer哪一個(gè)觀點(diǎn)，他們所在乎的是你的文章結(jié)構(gòu)清楚與否，包括觀點(diǎn)是否明確，對比是否宣明;在乎你的論點(diǎn)是否支持你的觀點(diǎn)，論據(jù)是否有力。
偶在此最主要的就是談?wù)撐恼陆Y(jié)構(gòu)及如何寫好論點(diǎn)，展開論據(jù)。
第四、要觀點(diǎn)明確 邏輯性強(qiáng)
基于T 友們具有了豐富的詞匯和語法的基礎(chǔ)，寫句子已經(jīng)不是什么難事。但是，如何寫好觀點(diǎn)明確、邏輯性強(qiáng)及對比宣明的好文章，一是和個(gè)人知識(shí)及想象力的多少有關(guān)，例如，It has recently been announced that a new movie theater may be built in your neighborhood. Do you support or oppose this plan? Why? Use specific reasons and details to support your answer. 你家附近將要建一個(gè)電影院。你同意還是反對，詳細(xì)闡述支持你看法的原因。
有些基礎(chǔ)知識(shí)欠缺或者想象力不豐富的朋友，只會(huì)想到——1，反對，為啥?太吵，人多;2，另一些人支持這個(gè)觀點(diǎn)，為啥支持?方便，近。他們在幾分鐘能想到也就這么多了。如何提高想象能力呢?在短時(shí)間內(nèi)我們也無法提高很多，但是我們可以用一些常規(guī)的思維去思考——連鎖想象法。例如，如果反對此觀點(diǎn)，電影院能讓我們想到什么不好的地方?從修建開始想——破壞綠化，如果它建在咱們附近原來是草坪的地方呢?在施工的時(shí)候有很多噪音、污染環(huán)境等等問題;從建好后想——人來人往，太嘈雜，剛開張時(shí)，說不定有什么慶?；顒?dòng)，人群擁擠，影響舍區(qū)的安靜，還有很多很多大家都可以用這種連鎖法想到。如果贊成的，方便，只需走路就可以看電影了;從走路又想到，節(jié)約路費(fèi)及想到如果在上下班高峰期看電影的話，就可以避開人多的公共交通工具了。。。另外，有了電影院，除了可以看電影幫助消費(fèi)者，另外可以有打工的機(jī)會(huì)，如賣票，小吃部工作——幫助學(xué)生補(bǔ)貼boards。這些觀點(diǎn)不外乎就是關(guān)于環(huán)境、社會(huì)關(guān)系、交通、學(xué)生、經(jīng)濟(jì)等等。
第五、熟記范文
在每次練習(xí)寫作文前，看幾篇和你想寫的命題相關(guān)的范文，記一些例子和句式;另外，注意看范文里論點(diǎn)和論據(jù)是如何展開，以及寫作思維，對比一下你自己的寫作思維。在寫的時(shí)候一定要卡時(shí)間，超過30分鐘就不要寫了，反過來再看范文，對比一下。如果你沒有寫完，沒有關(guān)系，總結(jié)經(jīng)驗(yàn)最重要，分析一下為什么沒有寫完，是因?yàn)閱卧~拼寫耽誤時(shí)間了，還是想不出來論點(diǎn)如何展開。多數(shù)人犯的是第二個(gè)問題，這個(gè)一是需要時(shí)間練習(xí)，二可以根據(jù)偶提供的辦法解決。
大家在審?fù)觐}后(花2分鐘想一下2-3個(gè)論點(diǎn))，把想到的論點(diǎn)在電腦上列個(gè)提綱。先把第一段，最后一段寫完，及第二、三或四段的首句寫完——首句就是論點(diǎn)，每段的body都是圍繞這幾個(gè)點(diǎn)來。如此，既防止寫不完的情況發(fā)生，又不會(huì)寫偏題——因?yàn)槟阍趯懯拙涞臅r(shí)候已經(jīng)檢查了和主題一致與否。把整個(gè)框架打好(在此申明，這個(gè)不是模板，模板太死板，雖然有它的好處，但是模板不能fit每個(gè)不同的命題)，再來想論據(jù)去支持論點(diǎn)。這一點(diǎn)就看個(gè)人的功底了。如果字?jǐn)?shù)夠了，沒有犯過大的語法錯(cuò)誤，無論文章內(nèi)容豐富與否，至少不會(huì)低于20分了。
字?jǐn)?shù)最好控制在320-450之間，太多或低于300都不好。太多的話，除非你寫得很到位，字字珠璣，否則有流水賬之嫌。建議大家多精練句式和邏輯思維。句式不一定要很復(fù)雜，如很多從句之類的，這里指的是地道的英語表達(dá)方法; 文章中最好簡單句兼插從句。精練句式有助于咱們提高寫作水平和質(zhì)量，不在乎寫得多少，只求寫得精及準(zhǔn)確與否;邏輯思維可幫助我們很快的展開論據(jù)支持論點(diǎn)，有條有理，讀者讀著心情也舒暢。
托福獨(dú)立寫作范文：每周長時(shí)間工作3天勝過短時(shí)間5天
Do you agree or disagree with the following statement: working three days a week with longer hours is better than working five days a week with shorter hours.
People nowadays are becoming more restless in daily work and life, in which the rhythm is in quite an amazing shift towards being faster. From my point of view, I would rather schedule fewer days of work rather than evenly distributed hours into more days.
Working three days in a week means that people will have four days off in a week, which leads to a more possibly flexible schedule. This will create a clear distinction between work and life. Not only do people have enough time to do house work, hang out with friends and read a book, but also they could plan a short trip somewhere nearby, which seems always to be in a rush in a five-day work circle. I work as an English course designer now. My supervisor permits that I can come to the office three days a week with the flexibility of arranging working days on my own. When I don’t come in, I usually visit exhibitions and art galleries, take my girl on a date, attend a reading session, and sometimes just simply camp in a mountain nearby Beijing. Apparently I am not having too much desire for an exhausting Friday drink or an anxiety when Sunday night comes. Now I have more accomplishments besides work such as improving my Spanish and Bulgarian and dwelling in a library enjoying researching academics.
Obviously, there is one implication to work fewer days: work longer hours each day. I am not hesitating to take this option still. I always need time to get into my role. When all these ideas come to me, I also don’t want to simply stop and leave the work to the next day. This is somewhat called “marginal time”, which means the time spent simply from switching from one mental status to another, for instance from that of working to that of lying down, takes certain amount of minutes to adjust to. Longer hours’ working usually can reduce this unecessary waste of time. I can go pretty far in my projects in a day if counting the long duration from early morning to late night without stopping. Some of my friends even see “work hard and play harder” as their motto. This is so true. Seeing one day’s workflow going fast is truly a pleasure, which always motivates the next progress to happen. I remember one time when my team and I went through an entire day’s brainstorm and received a huge burst of work until mid-night.
And there is one thing adding up to this. I take work as a path to an enjoyment of life. I would totally enjoy a short yet a little painfully intense work, enjoying at the moment of working, and enjoying afterwards as well.
(459 words, Ge Xu)
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