托福寫作高分怎樣造句
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托福寫作高分怎樣造句?
I 準(zhǔn)確的句子表達(dá)
1.句型分析
英語的句型包括以下幾種，簡單句、復(fù)合句、并列句、并列復(fù)合句等。在新托福寫作中，一般使用復(fù)合句，輔以并列句和并列復(fù)合句，當(dāng)然肯定要有簡單句，做到長短句相結(jié)合。下面摘抄幾個(gè)句子給大家認(rèn)識并分析一下復(fù)合句和并列復(fù)合句。
a.Even though I usually know what I have to say, I cannot always express myself correctly in English.
這句話是一個(gè)復(fù)合句，由even though引導(dǎo)的讓步狀語從句。
b.This challenges me to practice my spoken English, with the result that I can complete the speaking tasks more fluently and quickly.
這句話中是一個(gè)復(fù)合句。with介詞結(jié)構(gòu)中，有一個(gè)that引導(dǎo)的同位語從句對result進(jìn)行解釋說明。
c.I think this is less than ideal because any differences in opinion become personal conflicts, and therefore that might jeopardize the employee’s job.
上句話是一個(gè)并列復(fù)雜句。and 連接了兩個(gè)句子，是一個(gè)并列句;because引導(dǎo)的原因狀語從句。
d.Shallow writing is indicative of weak critical-thinking skills, and such writing, which is often described as “sophomoric”, receives low mark.
這句話同樣是并列復(fù)雜句。由and連接兩個(gè)句子，成為并列句，再一個(gè)which引導(dǎo)的定語從句。
2.有問題的句子的列舉
考生寫的句子容易出現(xiàn)三個(gè)問題：一是使用破碎句，二是使用接連句，三是句子連接不正確。
1)破碎句
所謂破碎句，就是句子不完整，通常是沒有謂語(或者說謂語是動(dòng)詞的非謂語形式，如分詞)，或者是從句單獨(dú)成句。
破碎句：She singing alone. (無謂語，singing是現(xiàn)在分詞)
正確句：She is singing alone.
破碎句：He did not come. Because he was sick. (從句單獨(dú)成句)
正確句：He did not come because he was sick.
2)接連句
所謂接連據(jù)，就是兩個(gè)句子直接連在一起，既未使用連詞，也未使用正確的標(biāo)點(diǎn)符號。
接連句:Professionals such as lawyers or accountants usually work longer hours than factory workers they have greater freedom in planning their time.
正確句一:Professionals such as lawyers or accountants usually work longer hours than factory workers. However, they have greater freedom in planning their time.
正確句二:Professionals such as lawyers or accountants usually work longer hours than factory workers; however, they have greater freedom in planning their time.
3)句子連接不正確
所謂句子連接不正確，就是兩個(gè)獨(dú)立的句子之間以逗號連接，這是不合英語語法的。正確的做法是以連詞、分號、冒號、句號等連接兩個(gè)句子。
不正確句:Breaking chalk into two pieces is a physical change, there is no change in the composition of the chalk.
正確句:Breaking chalk into two pieces is a physical change, so there is no change in the composition of the chalk.
II 高分表達(dá)
除了在句式上長短句相結(jié)合準(zhǔn)確表達(dá)外，三立在線建議新托福考生要使用一些特殊的句式，以使句型多樣化。句型多樣化也是作文得到高分的條件之一。除了我們之前經(jīng)常提到的高分句式，如倒裝句、強(qiáng)調(diào)句、狀語前置、插入語等，筆者還提出另外一個(gè)句式的多樣變化，即主語多樣化。下面筆者將列舉幾個(gè)句子概括介紹前面四種句型，而重點(diǎn)分析主語多樣化。
正常句: Luck only works in extreme cases.
倒裝句: Only in extreme cases does luck work. (否定詞位于句首的倒裝。)
正常句：The internet provides people access to the latest information.
強(qiáng)調(diào)句：It is the internet that provides people access to the latest information. (強(qiáng)調(diào)the internet)
正常句：The environment has been deteriorating severely along with the development of industry.
狀語前置句：Along with the accelerating development of industry, the environment has been deteriorating severely.
正常句:However, new zoos try to duplicate animals’ natural habitats as much as possible and give animals a comfortable amount of space.
插入語：New zoos, however, try to duplicate animals’ natural habitats as much as possible and give animals a comfortable amount of space. (連詞however做插入語)
主語多樣：
1.她突然想到了一個(gè)主意。
She suddenly had an idea.
通常情況下，考生會馬上對這句話進(jìn)行翻譯，基本不會動(dòng)句子結(jié)構(gòu)。但是以人作為主語的英語句子總是不能夠很吸引人，所以這個(gè)句子如果稍微做下修改，以后面的賓語“主意”做主語，這個(gè)句子會發(fā)生一些變化。
An idea suddenly occurred to her.
2.他開車心不在焉，幾乎闖禍。
He was absent-minded when driving, and almost caused an accident.
這句話依然是拿人做主語，稍微改一下，把心不在焉這個(gè)形容詞的名詞形式做主語，會大不相同。
His absence of mind during driving nearly caused an accident.
3.美利堅(jiān)合眾國創(chuàng)立于1789年。
The United States of America was founded in 1789.
這句話沒有任何錯(cuò)誤，但是不夠多樣，可以用時(shí)間作主語。
The year 1789 witnessed the founding of the United States of America.
III 實(shí)用句型
在文章的最后，三立在線為大家列舉幾個(gè)新托福考試中可以使用的套用句型，為一些寫句子摸不著頭緒的考生提供幫助。
1.It pays to make great efforts to prepare for TOEFL-ibt.
努力準(zhǔn)備新托?？荚囀侵档玫?。
2.Nothing is more important than to receive education.
沒有比接受教育更重要的了。
3.The reason why the white-collars suffer increasing work-related stress is that they pursue work achievement in career.
白領(lǐng)壓力日益增加的原因是他們在事業(yè)上有所追求。
4.It is time the related department took proper measures.
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托福寫作如何改進(jìn)轉(zhuǎn)折句
“there be句型”變?yōu)楸粍?dòng)語態(tài)
試比較
1. She used to be indifferent to the outside world, but an interloper changed her.
2. Her indifference to the outside world was changed by and interloper.
把but后面的句子改為短小插入語
試比較
1. Driven by an interest in words, Claire kept trying poetry, novelsand literature analyses, but she hardly succeeded in any of these endeavors at the very beginning.
2. Driven by an interest in words, Claire kept trying poetry, novels and literature analyses—all with little initial success.
把but后面部分改為更緊湊的從句
試比較
1. It was meant to be a brief parting, but it turned into a long, lingering one.
2. What was meant to be a brief parting turned into a long, lingering one.
第二句讀起來更加集中、緊湊，并且去掉了"It was, but it…”等雞肋部分。
積累一些可能替換but的連接詞
e.g. however/nonetheless/nevertheless/yet/whereas/while...
試比較
1. Once arriving home, she starts to review all the notes, not necessarily because the teacher requires her to do so,but because she encourages herself to study hard.
2. Once arriving home,she starts to review all the notes, as much from the requirement of the teacher,as from herself-encouragement.
對于but這一最為常見的轉(zhuǎn)折，我們可以從“是否可以直接去掉?是否可以改為插入語等句子成分?是否可以改為更為緊湊的從句?是否有其他替換表達(dá)?”這個(gè)方面進(jìn)行思考。
但應(yīng)該指出，應(yīng)該建立在“自己有把握判斷原句與改進(jìn)后句子的風(fēng)格與質(zhì)量”的基礎(chǔ)上進(jìn)行。有時(shí)候，不一定改的就比原句更好，短的不一定就更簡潔。
托福寫作解析:比較對比句怎么寫
Movies: serious or entertaining?
Therefore, the merits(advantage) encompassed within serious movies far outweigh those of entertaining movies.
Adervertising is the main cause of unhealthy eating habits.
In reality, compared with other sources of negative influences, advertising only plays a small role. the eating habits are formed on the basis of many complicated factors.Therefore, it is rash to consider it a major cause of those unhealthy eating habits.
Compared with A, B...中的A和B是兩個(gè)同類的事物
托福寫作解析:假設(shè)條件句怎么寫
It is essential for young people to have the ability to plan and organize.
If a high school student is about to leave school soon, it is necessary for him to have a most suitable plan before the graduation ceremony begins.
Teachers should give students homework everyday.
If teacher had been checking the students' progress with daily homework assignments, they might not have failed the test.
過去的虛擬，把反面的例子變成正面的評論
if sb had done, sb might/would have done
Traveling alone is better than travelling with a companion.
But for the assistance from a companion, travelers would be exposed to more dangers on the way.
現(xiàn)在或?qū)淼那闆r：but for sb/sth, sb would do sth
過去的情況： but for sb/sth, sb would have done
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