托福寫(xiě)作:連詞怎么用
在托福寫(xiě)作中,適當(dāng)?shù)氖褂靡恍┻B詞可以使我們的文章更加流暢,結(jié)構(gòu)更加緊湊,那么連詞在托福文章中具體有那些用法呢?來(lái)看看吧!
托福寫(xiě)作:連詞怎么用?
1.增補(bǔ)(Addition)
in addition, furthermore, again, also, besides, moreover, what`s more, similarly, next, finally.
2.比較(Comparison)
in the same way, likewise, similarly, equally, in comparison, just as
3.對(duì)照(Contrast)
whereas, in contrast, on the other hand, instead, however, nevertheless, unlike, even though, on the contrary, while
4.因果(Cause and effect)
because, because of, for, since, due to, owing to, thanks to, as a result(of), accordingly, hence, so, thus
5.強(qiáng)調(diào)(Emphasis)
certainly, above all, indeed, of course, surely, actually, as a matter of fact, chiefly, especially, primarily, in particular, undoubtedly, absolutely, most imprtant
6.讓步(Concession)
although, though, after all, in spite of, nevertheless, still, provided, while it is true....
7.例證(Exemplification)
for example, for instance, that is, namely, such as, in other words, in this case, by way of illustration.
8.總結(jié)(Conclusion)
to sum up, to conclude, in a word, in short, in brief, all in all, in all, to put it in a nutshell, in summary
9.推斷(Inference)
therefore, as a result(of), consequently, accordingly, so, otherwise
10.時(shí)間和空間(Time and space)
afterward, after, first, later, then, soon, outside, near, beyound, above, below, on the right(left), in the middle, opposite, in front of
大家在使用這些詞的時(shí)候要先弄清哪些是副詞,哪些是連詞.(副詞不可以連接兩個(gè)句子,連詞可以.)
以下是按照另外一種角度來(lái)概括啟承轉(zhuǎn)合:
啟
A proverb says...... At present.......
As the proverb says.... Currently.....
Generally speaking, .... Now,....
In general, ..... On the Whole....
It is clear that.... Recently.....
It is often said that.... Without doubt, .......
承
First(of all), ...... Moreover, .........
Firstly, ............ No one can deny that....
In the first place, ......... Obviously.....
To begin with, ......... Of course, .........
Also, ....... Similarly,.........
At the same time...... Therefore, we should realize that.....
Certainly...... There is no doubt that.......
In addition,..... What`s more, ..........
In fact........ It can be easily proved that...
Meanwhile......
轉(zhuǎn)
But... Still, ......
But the problem is not so simple...
There is a certain amount of truth in this, but we still have a problem with regard to.......
However, ....... To our surprise,..........
Nevertheless, ........ Unfortunately.......
On the other hand, .......
Yet difference will be found and that is why I feel that........
Others may find this to be true, but I do not. I think.....
合
Above all, In brief, ........
Accordingly, ..... In conclusion, ........
All in all, .......
In other words, it is hard to escape the conclusion that........
As a consequence, ......... In short, .........
As I have shown/said/stated/.... In sum, ........
In summary, ....... As has been noted, ....
Obviously, ......... By so doing, .....
On the whole, ..... Consequently, ........
Presumably, ....... Eventually, .........
To conclude, ...... Finally, ........
To sum up, ..... In a word, ......
To summarize, ........
托福寫(xiě)作提高技巧:巧用基本句式
1、表示原因
1)There are three reasons for this.
2)The reasons for this are as follows.
3)The reason for this is obvious.
4)The reason for this is not far to seek.
5)The reason for this is that...
例如 There are three reasons for the changes that have taken place inourlife.
Firstly,peoples living standard has been greatly improved.
Secondly,most people are well paid,and they can afford what they need or like.
Last but not least,more and more people prefer to enjoy modern life.
2、表示好處
1)It has the following advantages.
2)It does us a lot of good.
3)It benefits us quite a lot.
4)It is beneficial to us.
5)It is of great benefit to us.
例如: Books are like friends.They can help us know the world better,and they can open our minds and widen our horizons.Therefore,reading extensively is of great benefit to us.
3、表示壞處
1)It has more disadvantages than advantages.
2)It does us much harm.
3)It is harmfulto us.
例如:However,everything dividesinto two.Television can also
4、表示重要、必要、困難、方便、可能
1)It is important(necessary,difficult,convenient,possible)for sb.to do sth.
2)We think it necessary to do sth.
3)It plays an important role in our life.
例如: Computers are now being used everywhere,whether in the government,in schools or in business.Soon,computers will be found in every home,too.We have good reason to say that computers are playing an increasingly important role in our life and we have stepped into the Computer Age.
5、表示措施
1)We should take some effective measures.
2)We should try our best to overcome(conquer)the difficulties.
3)We should do our utmost in doing sth.
4)We should solve the problems that we are confronted(faced)with.
例如:The housing problem that we are confronted with is becoming more and more serious.Therefore,we must take some effective measures to solve it.
這些句型都是各位托友熟悉的句型,大家只要反復(fù)造句,反復(fù)運(yùn)用,很快就會(huì)運(yùn)用自如了。在托福考試中,利用這些句式進(jìn)行組合,就可以表達(dá)清楚觀點(diǎn),寫(xiě)出邏輯清晰有條理的托福作文了。
正確使用托福寫(xiě)作情態(tài)動(dòng)詞
很多同學(xué)在托福寫(xiě)作中常常不注意情態(tài)動(dòng)詞的正確應(yīng)用。事實(shí)上,托福的寫(xiě)作的大作文往往要求寫(xiě)對(duì)某個(gè)事物或者現(xiàn)象的評(píng)價(jià),所以不可避免要出現(xiàn)帶有情態(tài)動(dòng)詞的觀點(diǎn)句。
本文就這個(gè)問(wèn)題跟大家討論:
首先是情態(tài)動(dòng)詞,尤其是Will的漏掉。中國(guó)考生受漢語(yǔ)影響,一提到“將來(lái)”才會(huì)有意識(shí)地用will, 實(shí)際上will可以表達(dá)“能、將、會(huì)、要、就”等多種意義。只是涉及到這樣的地方很多學(xué)員就把這幾個(gè)詞當(dāng)作虛詞忽略掉了,以至于經(jīng)常出現(xiàn)“觀點(diǎn)”與“事實(shí)”不分的句子, 如:
Riding bicycles reduces air pollution.
如果沒(méi)有情態(tài)動(dòng)詞,這個(gè)句子就是一個(gè)表示目前存在的狀態(tài)或者事實(shí),而不表示個(gè)人對(duì)騎自行車的評(píng)價(jià)。
其它的常見(jiàn)的漏用還體現(xiàn)在與if引導(dǎo)的狀語(yǔ)從句一起連用的主句中, so that或者 in order that引導(dǎo)的從句,或者是與without, in case of等介詞短語(yǔ)連用的主句, 不論條件還是目的都是寫(xiě)作中經(jīng)常出現(xiàn)的句式。如:
If I have time tomorrow, I drive to pick you up.
Xiao Zhang gets up very early so that he catches the earliest bus to work.
Without enough time to stay inside campus, college students don't have time to improve themselves.
其次是情態(tài)動(dòng)詞的誤用,主要問(wèn)題是中國(guó)學(xué)生在亮觀點(diǎn)時(shí)對(duì)“can”情有獨(dú)鐘,而英式的學(xué)風(fēng)歷來(lái)講究嚴(yán)謹(jǐn),像can 這樣語(yǔ)氣過(guò)于絕對(duì)的表達(dá)最好換成may/ will, 或者是語(yǔ)氣更委婉的might/would probably等, 同時(shí)還要搭配一定程度的副詞,如:
indulgence in computer games can lead to social violence especially of teenagers.上句中can不如might用起來(lái)更加客觀,因?yàn)閹缀趺總€(gè)小孩都玩游戲,但絕不是每個(gè)人都會(huì)犯罪。
另外一個(gè)容易誤用的詞是should,多表示根據(jù)社會(huì)風(fēng)俗習(xí)慣個(gè)人的責(zé)任,而在比較正式的議論文寫(xiě)作中,多數(shù)句子是以客觀事物做主語(yǔ)的, 所以用should就有些不太恰當(dāng),如:
To tackle the problem of youth crimes related with computer games, advertisement enterprises should restrict the large-scale promotion.
一般我們會(huì)用另外一個(gè)更客觀性的短語(yǔ)be to do來(lái)代替, 或者是shall,但是這里的shall不是用于第一人稱后的將來(lái)時(shí)符號(hào),而表示的是一種情態(tài)。
至于must, 因?yàn)檎Z(yǔ)氣實(shí)在強(qiáng)硬,所以一般在社會(huì)性的問(wèn)題的論述上我們要慎用,建議多換成need/ shall/ be to do 或者是be expected to do形式。如:
To help students get better employment, universities must increase the skillful courses.
雖然情態(tài)動(dòng)詞沒(méi)有在評(píng)分標(biāo)準(zhǔn)中明確標(biāo)示出來(lái),不是關(guān)系是否上6分的語(yǔ)法采分點(diǎn),但也會(huì)在一定程度上影響到文章的質(zhì)量,進(jìn)一步影響托福作文分?jǐn)?shù),所以希望能引起大家足夠的重視。
托福寫(xiě)作6個(gè)錯(cuò)誤點(diǎn)一定要注意
錯(cuò)誤方法一:在準(zhǔn)備TWE185題庫(kù)或者準(zhǔn)備Barron、delta、longman等輔導(dǎo)材料的題目。
托福作文題目都是現(xiàn)在新托??荚嚨恼骖}的題目,但是很多考友發(fā)過(guò)來(lái)的文章是TWE的185題庫(kù),或者是Barron、delta、longman的題目,這些題目不是說(shuō)沒(méi)有價(jià)值,而是現(xiàn)在這些材料已經(jīng)完全被證明與現(xiàn)行的新托??荚嚥荒芡耆榆壛?,尤其是當(dāng)我們看到kaplan里面的某些題目,竟然是在討論諸如愛(ài)情之類的問(wèn)題的時(shí)候,我們只能感嘆某些參考書(shū)的專業(yè)度實(shí)在需要極強(qiáng)。
那么TWE185就完全沒(méi)有價(jià)值了么?當(dāng)然不是,在新托福剛剛出現(xiàn)的時(shí)候,人們就已經(jīng)發(fā)現(xiàn)其實(shí)新托??荚囍械暮芏嗫谡Z(yǔ)題目就是出自于原來(lái)的TWE的185題庫(kù),因此拿原來(lái)老托福的185題庫(kù)來(lái)準(zhǔn)備我們現(xiàn)在的口語(yǔ)是非常合適的,但是如果你仍然在用這些TWE185題目在準(zhǔn)備現(xiàn)在的獨(dú)立作文的話,那么只能說(shuō)你已經(jīng)站在起跑線的后面了。
錯(cuò)誤方法二:字?jǐn)?shù)越多越好。
當(dāng)我們單純的看到“字?jǐn)?shù)越多越好”的時(shí)候,可以說(shuō)這是有一定的道理的,因?yàn)槿绻愕淖謹(jǐn)?shù)越多,那么就越能更好的闡明自己的觀點(diǎn),但是很多考友特別喜歡將這種思路發(fā)揮到極致。要知道其實(shí)托福作文如果能達(dá)到350字-450字就已經(jīng)很好了,只要達(dá)到這個(gè)范圍內(nèi)基本上就不會(huì)對(duì)你的分?jǐn)?shù)產(chǎn)生任何負(fù)面的影響了。
當(dāng)然如果你的字?jǐn)?shù)少于300字的話,那么很有可能對(duì)你的作文產(chǎn)生負(fù)面影響,但是只要是300字以上就問(wèn)題不大了。當(dāng)然還會(huì)馬上有人問(wèn),如果我的作文字?jǐn)?shù)超過(guò)了500字呢?說(shuō)真的,如果你能有寫(xiě)500字的能力,那么為什么不省下來(lái)一些時(shí)間,來(lái)檢查一下自己這篇作文呢?因?yàn)楫?dāng)作文達(dá)到500字的時(shí)候,絕對(duì)已經(jīng)高于托福所要求的字?jǐn)?shù)了,再寫(xiě)多一點(diǎn)已經(jīng)不會(huì)提升你的分?jǐn)?shù)了,當(dāng)然也不會(huì)使你的分?jǐn)?shù)降低。
因此,這個(gè)時(shí)候不如好好修改一下已經(jīng)寫(xiě)過(guò)的文章,或者把寫(xiě)過(guò)的文章好好潤(rùn)潤(rùn)色,加入一些強(qiáng)調(diào)句式或者倒裝句,這樣會(huì)使自己的文章看上去更有生氣,作文就好像是女人,這個(gè)世界上沒(méi)有丑女人,只有懶女人。就像只要女人好好打扮就一定會(huì)光彩照人一樣,我們的作文只要好好打扮也一定會(huì)讓人感覺(jué)光彩奪目的。因此,我們只要是能寫(xiě)到350字以上,我們?cè)谧謹(jǐn)?shù)這一點(diǎn)上基本上就完成了任務(wù),完全沒(méi)有一定讓自己的作文字?jǐn)?shù)超過(guò)500字,要知道“越多越好”也是要有個(gè)度的。
錯(cuò)誤方法三:剛開(kāi)始寫(xiě)作文,就要限定時(shí)間。
當(dāng)我們剛剛開(kāi)始準(zhǔn)備作文的時(shí)候,由于國(guó)內(nèi)英語(yǔ)教育只注重輸入而不注重輸出的特點(diǎn)決定了,我們現(xiàn)在國(guó)內(nèi)的很多考友們,有可能在真正準(zhǔn)備新托??荚嚨淖魑闹坝锌赡軓膩?lái)都沒(méi)有寫(xiě)過(guò)幾篇作文,因此當(dāng)面的托??荚囘@么多字?jǐn)?shù)的要求的時(shí)候,常常會(huì)覺(jué)得自己無(wú)所適從。因此很多人,在準(zhǔn)備不充分的情況下就限定自己一定要在規(guī)定的30分鐘時(shí)間之內(nèi),完成托福作文。
殊不知,任何一個(gè)考試都是要循序漸進(jìn)的,作文也是如此。當(dāng)我們剛開(kāi)始準(zhǔn)備作文的時(shí)候,首先要追求的是成功率,也就是完成度,而不是時(shí)間。換句話說(shuō),在準(zhǔn)備托福以及SAT作文的前期,首先要做的,是完成作文,也就是不管花多少時(shí)間,一定要讓自己的作文達(dá)到300字以上,而且如果自己準(zhǔn)備考試的時(shí)間比較充分的話,最好剛開(kāi)始的3-5篇作文都是不給自己限定時(shí)間,首先追求的是能把作文寫(xiě)完,然后當(dāng)我們感覺(jué)有話可說(shuō)的時(shí)候,在提升自己的寫(xiě)作速度,換句話說(shuō)也就是限定自己在30分鐘之內(nèi)完成自己的獨(dú)立作文。
錯(cuò)誤方法四:托福作文模板會(huì)使我的作文產(chǎn)生低分。
這里面之所以很多人會(huì)認(rèn)為作文模板會(huì)使自己的作文出現(xiàn)低分,那是因?yàn)槲覀冇刑嗟娜擞玫降哪0宥际且磸木W(wǎng)絡(luò)上,要么從自己的老師那里得到的模板,要知道網(wǎng)絡(luò)上的模板,很多人是直接拿過(guò)來(lái)就用的,哪怕是培訓(xùn)機(jī)構(gòu)的老師給的模板,也不可能是每個(gè)班都給你新的模板,也一定是有無(wú)數(shù)的學(xué)生都用過(guò)這個(gè)模板了。因此,當(dāng)考官看到再看到同樣的模板的時(shí)候,一定會(huì)給你一個(gè)不是特別好的分?jǐn)?shù),這是讓我們很容易理解。
那么模板就不能用了么?當(dāng)然不是,模板可以用,而且也是能夠幫助你的高分。關(guān)鍵在于模板一定要是自己原創(chuàng)的,只有這樣才能讓考官眼前一亮,為自己贏得一個(gè)高分,要知道,高分都是有理由的,要給自己創(chuàng)造一個(gè)的高分的理由!
錯(cuò)誤方法五:不注重語(yǔ)法的準(zhǔn)確。
現(xiàn)在的很多考友是生活在用英語(yǔ)的環(huán)境之中的,比如說(shuō)現(xiàn)在有很多考友是在美國(guó)或者英國(guó)上高中的,當(dāng)然也有很多考友是在國(guó)內(nèi)純英語(yǔ)的國(guó)際學(xué)校求學(xué),這些環(huán)境往往是全英文的環(huán)境,本來(lái)一個(gè)全英文的環(huán)境是十分有助于英語(yǔ)水平的提升的,但是實(shí)際上,純英語(yǔ)的環(huán)境對(duì)于英語(yǔ)的語(yǔ)法要求并不嚴(yán)格。換句話說(shuō),有可能一句話雖然有語(yǔ)病,但是由于對(duì)方能聽(tīng)懂,因此他也沒(méi)有糾正你,那么你也默認(rèn)這里是沒(méi)有問(wèn)題的。
因此我們會(huì)看到很多英語(yǔ)環(huán)境之內(nèi)的考生,往往在作文的部分折戟沉沙鐵未銷,就是因?yàn)檫@個(gè)關(guān)鍵性的語(yǔ)法的問(wèn)題。因此,當(dāng)我們?cè)跍?zhǔn)備作文部分以及口語(yǔ)部分這些主觀題的時(shí)候,要注意在考試之前一定要好好打磨一下自己的語(yǔ)法,否則后患無(wú)窮!
錯(cuò)誤方法六:作文格式只能采取0縮進(jìn),每段空1行的模式。
這種每段開(kāi)始0縮進(jìn),然后段與段之間空1行的模式,確實(shí)是現(xiàn)在西方非常流行的一種文章排版方式,但是要知道排版方式并不能影響到你的作文的評(píng)價(jià)或者說(shuō)分?jǐn)?shù),因此有些考友在考試之后就特別的擔(dān)心自己的作文的排版方式是傳統(tǒng)的,首行空4格,然后每段不空行的方式會(huì)影響自己的成績(jī),其實(shí)這是完全沒(méi)有必要的。你采取的任何排版方式都不會(huì)影響的作文成績(jī),因此請(qǐng)不要再為這一點(diǎn)擔(dān)心。當(dāng)然你如果采取了這種新穎的排版方式更好,如果沒(méi)有呢,其實(shí)也沒(méi)有任何的問(wèn)題。
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