英語寫作：青少年犯罪類范文

　　Some people think that young people who commit serious crisis should be punished in the same way as adults. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

　　Juvenile delinquency has been a common issue globally since the rate of minor crime is skyrocketing. There is a controversy issue about appropriate punishments to underage criminals. In my opinion, underage criminals should not be treated strictly same as adults due to existence of some special circumstances.

　　Deterrent forces might be considered as the most primary impact by people who support the same punishment. Teenagers enable to know that they are incapable of enjoying the extra-legal sanctions. Namely, some potential underage criminals may think twice about a heavily price for their transgression rather than relying on legal protection for young people.

　　Nevertheless, juvenile delinquency should deserve special treatment with several reasons. First, the uncompleted moral education may be the root cause. As known people could become law-abiding citizens based on well-educated comparably. Second, young people sent to prison are likely labeled social isolates, which further prevents them to accept sound education and communicate with others. Because there is always a day that underage criminals will be released from prison, re-entering the society.

　　Overall, even though deterrent effect arising from the same punishments can force young people leave the crisis to some extend, this principle also results in other problems, such as society isolation and lack of communication. Thus, giving underage criminals appropriate forgiveness as well as opportunities to re-enter the society are needed.

　　【本文作者：Lynn。(公眾號：英文寫作批改與指導(dǎo))】

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