實(shí)戰(zhàn)演練

　　我們只有做到這些，才可以解決空氣污染的問題。

　　Only if we do these can we solve the problems of air pollution.

　　Only if we follow the rules, can we work it out smoothly.

　　Only if we start out small, can we have a better life.

　　Only when we do all mentioned above, can we make a success.

　　Only in this way, can we succeed.

　　Only in these ways, can we build up a harmonious society.

　　Teamwork spirit contributes a lot to our success.

　　Whatever you decide to do, just do the best you can.

　　There are three factors contributing to my point.

　　There is an old saying that...

　　There are many reasons accounting for this change

　　Opinions are divided on the felling of happiness.

　　This story reminds me of one of my former experiences.

　　(3)例文臨摹 (以“調(diào)查(偶像)”為例)

　　[調(diào)查的時(shí)間、問題、對(duì)象] Last week , we did a survey among 2600 students on “Who Is Your Idol”. [調(diào)查結(jié)果] The survey shows that half of the girls choose film and TV stars as their idols, while 48% of the boys favor sports stars. As the data shows, “parents” ranks the second for the girls, but the fourth for the boys. However, the percentage of the boys choosing “great figure” is the same as that of the girls. [個(gè)人觀點(diǎn)] As for myself, Thomas Edison is my idol, because his invention have greatly changed our life.

　　★套用句型時(shí)，需注意：

　　1.不能盲目套句型，要自然、流暢為先;

　　2.注意there be句型的使用;

　　3.觀點(diǎn)要鮮明，例子要符合完整的邏輯。

　　最后，溫東瑜老師給學(xué)生提出寫作建議：

　　一個(gè)“善于”，善于做筆記;

　　兩個(gè)“重視”，重視對(duì)筆記的整理、分類、歸納，重視句子翻譯和寫作訓(xùn)練;

　　三個(gè)“主動(dòng)”，主動(dòng)找老師面批，主動(dòng)進(jìn)行書寫訓(xùn)練，主動(dòng)看英文原著和上外國(guó)的英語網(wǎng)站。