高中英語(yǔ)作文高分秘籍
高中英語(yǔ)作文高分秘籍
高中英語(yǔ)怎么寫(xiě)好高分作文呢?把要背的要讀,都要復(fù)習(xí)好哦,小編今天整理了一些句式和范文,希望可以幫助到大家。一、詞匯
詞匯是構(gòu)成一篇作文的基本要素,高級(jí)、準(zhǔn)確的詞匯更是一篇好作文不可缺少的“磚”。我們可以從使用高級(jí)詞匯、連詞的使用、詞組的變化使用來(lái)讓我們的作文有一個(gè)好的“建筑材料。”
使用高級(jí)詞匯可以讓我們的作文更上一層樓。
所謂“高級(jí)詞匯”就是文章中運(yùn)用得精準(zhǔn)的詞匯。作文中如果可以用高級(jí)詞匯代替普通詞匯那會(huì)讓閱卷老師眼前一亮。試想一下,如果閱卷老師在改了n篇平淡無(wú)奇的作文后突然看到你的作文用更加高級(jí)的詞匯表達(dá)了和其他人一樣的意思,他肯定覺(jué)得你的英語(yǔ)水平要更好,從而給你打高分。我在這里歸納了一些可相互替換的詞匯:
important→fundamental /significant
related→relevant
improve→promote
old people→the aged
government→administration
excellent →outstanding
solve →tackle
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這一類的詞有很多,這就需要各位學(xué)弟學(xué)妹們?cè)谄綍r(shí)的學(xué)習(xí)中多積累,畢竟積土成山嘛!
連接詞是我們最常用的,不管在哪篇文章中都可以看到它們的身影。要注意使用連接詞不能也只是萬(wàn)年不變的firstly、secondly、because,要多用詞組或復(fù)雜的連接詞。比如:
(1)表先后次序:
at this time; at last;
previously; eventually;
last but not least;to begin with;
to start with;to end with;
afterwards; preceding ;
originally;ultimate
(2)表因果關(guān)系:
since; as; for;
in that...; owing to; due to;
for the reason that...
the reason seems to be obvious;
as a result of;consequently;
as a result;hence;
in consequence;accordingly;
under these conditions there upon
(3)表轉(zhuǎn)折關(guān)系:even so;however;though;even though; in spite of; regardless of;and yet; but unless. nonetheless
(4)表并列關(guān)系: as well as;either...,or...;both...and...
(5)表遞進(jìn)關(guān)系:
furthermore;moreover;further;
in this way ; not only...but also...;
not...but...; in addition;
additionally;besides;moreover;
on the one hand..,on the other hand...;
(6)舉例關(guān)系:
for example;for instance;
such as; a case in point is...;
the point is best illustrated with the example of …
(7) 地點(diǎn)關(guān)系:
beyond; opposite to;
adjacent to; at the same place;
over; in the middle;
around; in front of;
in the distance; farther;
here and there; above;
below; between; on this side.
這些都只是一些常用的,更多的是需要你們?nèi)シe累。最后,還有一個(gè)原則我要分享給你們,“單詞不如詞組好,詞組不如句子好”,如果一個(gè)詞組和一個(gè)單詞都能表達(dá)你的意思,那么就用詞組去表達(dá);如果一個(gè)句子能準(zhǔn)確地表達(dá)你的意思,那么就用句子去表達(dá)。
二、句子
句子方面有以下幾點(diǎn)可以多去琢磨琢磨:分詞、倒裝、強(qiáng)調(diào)、修飾。
分詞,多用分詞形式表達(dá)句子比用簡(jiǎn)單句更能吸引閱卷老師的眼球。比如:If such is the case, you should apologize to him. 如果用分詞結(jié)構(gòu)表達(dá),就可以把is換成being,句子就成了Such being the case, you should apologize to him.這樣是不是顯得高級(jí)一些呢?
其實(shí)我們經(jīng)??吹降寡b句,只是自己用得并不多,倒裝時(shí)常和虛擬語(yǔ)氣、省略句聯(lián)系在一起。如果一篇作文中能夠把倒裝句用得很溜,那也會(huì)是一大亮點(diǎn)。強(qiáng)調(diào)句也是作文中上午一大亮點(diǎn),這個(gè)大家可以平時(shí)多注意一下,運(yùn)用得好就是錦上添花。如:Only through these measures can we hope to solve the problem.
最后是修飾,修飾即從句的使用。賓語(yǔ)從句、定語(yǔ)從句、狀語(yǔ)從句、主語(yǔ)從句這些都可以用在我們的作文中。比如:
(1)主語(yǔ)從句
It is common knowledge that…;
It goes without saying that…
(2)賓語(yǔ)從句
We cannot understand why he was so cruel to his roommates.;The problem is not who will go, but who will stay.
(3)定語(yǔ)從句
As is shown/ illustrated/ described…in the cartoon/ picture/ graph/ table…;
There are many reasons why …;
It is estimated that tens of billions of pounds is spent on cigarettes every year in our country, which is a huge waste.
(4)狀語(yǔ)從句(時(shí)間,原因,地點(diǎn),條件,讓步,轉(zhuǎn)折等)
Whatever the reason, there are still some problems with student use of computers.