在托福寫作教學(xué)過程中，經(jīng)常碰到我們學(xué)員在寫作大作文的開頭的時候廢話連篇，長度爆長，句子惡心，基本都屬于見光死開頭，也就是說文章開頭如果這么寫的話，基本就被劃到5分或以下的檔次了。下面是小編給大家?guī)淼脑斀馔懈懽魇锥蔚闹匾?，希望能幫到大?

　　詳解托福寫作首段的重要性

　　比如：

　　見光死系列

　　With the development of society and economy， more and more children spend more and more time on computer playing more and more. Some people who are strongly against it think that it has negative effects on them both physically and mentally. In my opinion， I think that children should not play computer， they need choose other games.

　　名師講解如何寫好開頭

　　這就是傳說中的見光死開頭!首段又臭又長，不是說不能寫長，而是空有長度，沒有內(nèi)容，考官看完會直接傻掉。很多同學(xué)喜歡寫with the development of society and economy 這樣的開頭，其實寫過作文的人就知道，這是典型的中式思維模式在作怪。英國人的思維方式和我們不同，他們重視細節(jié)，講究單刀直入，所以開頭的廢話連篇會直接讓考官感到反感，惡心，進而影響整篇文章的分數(shù)。還有那個經(jīng)典的more and more，重復(fù)太多明顯缺乏詞匯量。

　　下面是托福寫作的優(yōu)秀范文：

　　I tend to agree that young children can be negatively affected by too much time spent on the computer every day. This is partly because sitting in front of a screen for too long can be damaging to both the eyes and the physical posture of a young child， regardless of what they are using the computer for.

　　這個開頭就非常符合英國人的口味，不但開頭沒有任何廢話和空洞的內(nèi)容，相反，句子充滿務(wù)實，具體的風(fēng)格，而且，開頭的最后一句話是對中間段落的一點提示，有過渡的作用。

　　托福寫作素材模板：《老友記》

　　托福寫作常用素材考生應(yīng)該平時注意積累，關(guān)于《老友記》話題的模板素材，非常適合托福備考考生，小編和大家分享一下!

　　素材段落

　　As one of the most successful TV series, Friends has produced a phenomenal impact on culture and entertainment. Even the producers of this sitcom did not expect that it would become a symbol of American pop culture when they were originally just trying to tell a simple story of six young people living in a loft in New York. The ten seasons of Friends depict the most important ten years in the lives of these main characters. They went through ups and downs in their careers and lives while the unchanged theme during the ten years was the friendship they had for one another. In addition to their precious relationships, this TV show also illustrates the living status of young people, which has significantly influenced the way people talk and communicate all around the world.

　　單詞和詞組

　　phenomenal 巨大的、杰出的

　　=remarkable, exceptional

　　phenomenal development

　　ups and downs 起伏

　　=successes and failures

　　Ups and downs are to be expected in life, but that does not make the down parts any easier.

　　話題詞匯

　　觀眾 audience

　　大眾文化交流 exchange of popular culture

　　引起大眾的關(guān)注 catch the public attention

　　媒體報道 media coverage

　　肥皂劇 soap opera

　　喜劇 comedy

　　悲劇 tragedy

　　情景喜劇 sitcom

　　談話類節(jié)目 talk show