雅思寫作7分句評析常用句型
下面這些句子是雅思基礎(chǔ)班語法課的作業(yè)，所選句子全部來自于雅思高分作文(7分水平以上)，對于其它雅思班的同學(xué)來說也可以當(dāng)作一個很好的參考，看看下面這些句子你的表達(dá)和這里提供的model answer是否一致，如果基本一致的話，恭喜你!說明你的雅思寫作水平已經(jīng)達(dá)到7分的水準(zhǔn)啦!
1. 一個人的實(shí)際能力才是企業(yè)所真正看重的。
It is one's practical capability that enterprises truly value.
(這句話用強(qiáng)調(diào)句句型表達(dá)效果比較好。)
2. 我認(rèn)為我們發(fā)明一種新的語言來取代英語是沒有必要的.
I don't think it necessary to invent a new kind of language to take the place of English.
(這句話有太多的同學(xué)用"instead of"來表示“取代”的意思，再次強(qiáng)調(diào)，instead of是介詞詞組，表示"……而不是……"的意思。)
3. 然而，關(guān)于它是一件好事還是壞事，人們有不同的態(tài)度。
People, nevertheless, hold various opinions in terms of the issue whether it is a blessing or a curse.
(這句話有很多人用"good thing"和"bad thing"表示“好事”和“壞事”，在書面語中推薦用blessing和curse，絕對的less common vocabulary!)
4. 很多國家的失業(yè)率在不斷攀升這一事實(shí)是我們無法否認(rèn)的。
The fact that the unemployment rates in quite a number of countries keep rising can not be denied.
5. 在給出我的觀點(diǎn)之前，我認(rèn)為看一看問題的兩面是很重要的。
I hold it essential to examine the both sides of the issue before presenting my viewpoint.
(這句話有幾個重點(diǎn)：首先表示 “看一看”不宜用"look at"，那是“盯著……看”的意思，examine是“仔細(xì)審視”的意思，用在這里正合適。“問題”在這里應(yīng)該用issue而不是problem，因?yàn)?problem相當(dāng)于trouble，一定是負(fù)面的。Issue表示“有爭議的問題”，大家記住，雅思作文里討論的話題絕大多數(shù)都屬于issue。此外，present屬于less common vocabulary,是“give”的升級版。)
6. 不同的人們對于全球化是否有利于經(jīng)濟(jì)的發(fā)展這個問題持有不同的看法.
Different people hold various viewpoints as to the issue whether globalization is beneficial to the economic development.
7. 令人感到遺憾的是大多數(shù)人所在乎的僅僅就只是他們怎么樣才能更多地賺到錢。
It is a pity that all the majority of people care about is how they could be paid more.
8. 隨著越來越多的婦女參與全職工作，由誰來照顧孩子已經(jīng)成為了社會上的一個問題。
With increasing number of women taking part in full-time jobs, who should take care of children has become a social issue.
(注意with引導(dǎo)的成分名詞后面必須跟動詞的ing形式，很多同學(xué)這一題一上來就寫"With more and more women take part in full-time job"是錯誤的。)
第二單元：定語從句
1. (Letter) 我們這次還是約在上次一起吃晚飯的餐廳見面吧!
Let’s meet at the restaurant where we had dinner together last time!
2. (寫作) 環(huán)境保護(hù)是一個如今為人們廣為討論的一個話題。
The environmental protection is a topic (which is) widely discussed by people nowadays.
3. (寫作) 我們必須承認(rèn)，那些反對此觀點(diǎn)的人們也有一定的道理。
Admittedly, those who oppose to the viewpoint also have their reasons to a certain extent.
4. (寫作) 人們往往會和觀念與自己相近的人交朋友。
People tend to make friends with those people whose viewpoints are similar to their own.
People tend to make friends with those who share similar viewpoints to their own.
5. (寫作) 手提電腦如今如此普及的一個重要原因就是它的使用方便。
A major reason why lap-tops are so popular nowadays is that it is easy to use.
6.(口語) 我計劃于2010年回國，到那時候我將年滿30歲。
I am planning to come back in 2010, by which time (when) I will be 30.
7.(口語) 《荷馬史詩》是一本很精彩的書，我從中學(xué)到了很多。
Homer Epic is a wonderful book, from which I have learned a lot.
8.(口語) 最激動人心的一次旅行經(jīng)歷是在巴厘島，在那里我有生以來第一次體驗(yàn)了潛水。
The most exciting traveling experience for me is the one in Bali, where I experienced diving for the first time in my life.
9.(口語) 我父母一共生了三個孩子，我是其中最大的。
My parents have three children, among whom I am the eldest.
10.(口語) David和我住在一個寢室已經(jīng)兩年了，他是一個非常搞笑的家伙。
David, with whom I have been sharing a dorm for 2 years, is quite a funny guy.
David, who is quite a funny guy, has been sharing a dorm with me for 2 years.
第三單元
Describe what you would do if you receive a lot of money.
I would definitely donate at least one third of the money to the charity so that the poor could be financially supported.
Describe a musical instrument (Guitar)So effective has playing guitar been proved to attract girls that the number of college guys learning it has been soaring.
Describe a clothing brand you like.
There are a lot of clothing brands I adore, with Armani being my favorite.
Describe a city you have visited.
Sydney is known for a number of beautiful scenic spots, with the Sydney Opera House being the most most impressive.
第四單元
Describe a schoolmate of yours.
So popular was he that he was said to have attracted the attention from talent scouts.
為了不讓這樣的悲劇重演，我們有必要在城市采取更多治安措施。
It is necessary for us to adopt more security measures in cities in order not to repeat such tragedies.
我認(rèn)為孩子表現(xiàn)惡劣是家長的過錯。
I think children's behaving badly is the parents' fault.
不少人認(rèn)為寫信被使用手機(jī)取代是不可取代的趨勢。
Quite a number of people believe that letter writing's being replaced by mobile phones is an inevitable trend.
Do people take as much exercise as in the past?
Facing ever-fierce competition today, most people today are stressed-out and no longer taking as much as exercise as in the past.
Describe your career so far.
Having graduated from the university, I was offered a job from a multinational company as a market assistant,mainly taking charge of the collection of marketing statistics.
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