高考英語(yǔ)作文滿分
高考英語(yǔ)作文滿分
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高考英語(yǔ)作文滿分題目:
假設(shè)你是李華,你的英國(guó)筆友Bob將于九月到你所在城市的建新華文學(xué)校學(xué)中文,來(lái)信請(qǐng)你在學(xué)校附近為他找一套住房。請(qǐng)根據(jù)圖畫(huà)提供的信息,寫(xiě)信介紹住房的情況,并告知住房面積為25平方米,月租500元。
注意:
1.詞數(shù):100左右:
2.參考詞匯:房租—Tent(n.).
I’m very happy to receive your letter, and I’m glad to hear that you will go to China to learn Chinese here. I have already found a fiat for you. It is on Fangcao Street, which is not far from Jianxin Chinese School. Bus No.11 can take you there, and it is one stop before the Chinese School. The flat is on the third floor with 3 rooms, one of which is bedroom, the other two are bathroom and kitchen. There are a bed, a sofa, a desk and some chairs in this 25 square-metres small fiat, and the rent is 500 yuan per month. Maybe this fiat is not as good as your wish, but I’ll try my best to meet your needs. If it is not suitable enough, write to me and I will look for another better place.
Hope you will come here soon!
All the best!
Yours, Li Hua
滿分理由
本文格式正確,意思表述完整,行文流暢自然。作者在寫(xiě)作過(guò)程中注意長(zhǎng)短句并用,還使用了以'which,’引導(dǎo)的非限定性定語(yǔ)從句,從而使文章層次分明,富于變化,不愧為考場(chǎng)佳作。
Dear Bob,
Welcome to China! You wrote to me to find a place for you.
I have found an apartment on Fangcao Street near Jianxin Chinese School. It is on the third floor and there’re three rooms in it: a bedroom, a kitchen, and a bathroom. There is a bed, a sofa, a desk and a chair in the bedroom. The house is 25 square metres and the rent is 500 yuan per month.
Also from this house you can get to your school easily. Just take the No.11 bus at the bus-stop in front of the building. It is only one stop. At last, will you please tell me the time you arrive? Then I’U be able to meet you at the airport, see you.
Best wishes !
Yours, Li Hua
滿分理由2
本文格式正確,內(nèi)容完整,表述清楚,銜接緊密流暢,時(shí)態(tài)語(yǔ)態(tài)使用準(zhǔn)確,特別是結(jié)尾末段適度的發(fā)揮,既充實(shí)了內(nèi)容,又符合邏輯,成為本文與眾不同的亮點(diǎn)。
Dear Bob,
How are you these days?
I’m so glad to know that you’ll come to our city to learn Chinese. You asked me to find a place for you. Now I’ve found one which I think is pretty good. The place is on Fang Cao Street which is near the No.11 bus stop. It’s just one stop away from Jianxin Chinese School.
There are three rooms, a kitchen, a bathroom and a bedroom. Though it is not very big, only 25 square metres, I think it is suitable. By the way, the rent is 500 yuan per month. I hope you’ll like it. If not, I’ll try to find another place for you.
Yours,
Li Hua
滿分理由3
本文內(nèi)在邏輯性很強(qiáng),由遠(yuǎn)及近。由外及內(nèi),層次分明,錯(cuò)落有致。同時(shí)讓步狀語(yǔ)從句運(yùn)用得恰到好處,很出彩,再則結(jié)構(gòu)完整,從開(kāi)頭的問(wèn)候語(yǔ)到結(jié)尾都很完備。
Dear Bob,
I’m so glad that you are coming to learn Chinese here. I’ve already found you a house near our school. I’d like to tell you something about it.
You may get on No.ll bus at Fang Cao Street and the next stop is just Jian Xin Chinese School. The house is near the school. It is about 25 square metres. In the bedroom, there is a bed, a sofa standing against the wall and a table near the window. You may find a light on the table and a chair next to it. There are two other rooms connecting the bedroom. The left one is a bathroom and the right one is a kitchen. So you may cook by yourself. The rent for the house is 500 yuan per month. Hope you’ll enjoy staying here!
Yours,
Li Hua
滿分理由4
本文內(nèi)容具體,詳略得當(dāng),表述方式很有創(chuàng)造力和新意,長(zhǎng)短句并用,語(yǔ)言結(jié)構(gòu)富于變化,錯(cuò)落有致,順暢圓潤(rùn),尤其是情態(tài)動(dòng)詞和分詞的運(yùn)用很獨(dú)到,為文章增色不少。
Dear Bob,
I’m glad to hear from you.
Welcome to our city in september. I’ve found a suitable house for you. The house is on Fang Cao Street, not far from the Jianxin Chinese School. If you take the No.11 bus, it is just one stop.
It is a flat on the third floor of a building. It has three rooms, a living-room, a bathroom and a kitchen. You can cook yourself. The mirror, the basin and the bathtub are very convenient for you. In the living-room, there is a bed, a sofa and a desk with chair. The desk is next to the window. It will be good for study. The total size is 25 square metres and the rent is 500 yuan a month.
Yours,
Li Hua
2012高考英語(yǔ)滿分作文題目2(上海):
描述你在學(xué)校的一次午餐,具體要求如下:
詳細(xì)描述用餐的情況
簡(jiǎn)要表述你對(duì)這次午餐的感受
這是一篇簡(jiǎn)單卻需要挖掘的文章,因?yàn)槿绻皇敲枋鲇貌颓闆r,顯然缺乏深度,夸夸其談,流于表面。學(xué)生拿到這樣的題目需要仔細(xì)考慮用餐背后的東西。比較容易想到的話題是食物浪費(fèi)、用餐衛(wèi)生、餐桌禮儀等。在創(chuàng)作范文中,筆者另辟蹊徑,通過(guò)大多數(shù)同齡人用餐時(shí)的匆忙來(lái)襯托“我”的悠然自得,凸顯出在緊張的高中學(xué)生生涯中,作者能夠留有一片心靈凈土,通過(guò)飲食來(lái)調(diào)節(jié)情緒,更好地面對(duì)挑戰(zhàn),表現(xiàn)出樂(lè)觀的人生態(tài)度。此文結(jié)構(gòu)簡(jiǎn)單,文筆清新,語(yǔ)言精準(zhǔn),并運(yùn)用了高中階段常見(jiàn)的語(yǔ)法結(jié)構(gòu),不失為一個(gè)很好的作文模板,供學(xué)生借鑒。
滿分范文:
The instant the bell indicating the endof the last class rang, out of theclassroompoured all students but one。Unlikemy peers, I was in no hurry tomake a run for the school canteen, to rush through lunch and to return to the classroomfor homework. I arrived at the canteenwhen amassive queue had formed.Waitingformy turn patiently, I smelled the aroma ofthe appetizing food. Greasy as some dishesmight be, thewide range of food preparedby the schoolwas superior in nutritional val-ue to that found elsewhere.
The typical schedule of a highschooleris extraordinarily hectic and thus lunch breakis a rare timewhen overworked students canwind down and enjoy the pleasure providedby the flavorful food. Imake it a point topampermy taste buds by savoring every littlebit of taste in food.What I usually like todo over lunch is have amindless conversa-tionwith a couple of studentswho have alsolearnt to smell the roses along the bonebreaking journey through high school. Werounded off our lunch with a dessert, re-freshed and satisfied。 Come to think of it, it is not the foodbutmy attitude towards life that affordsmepleasure and empowersme in facing up tovarious challenges.(219words)
高考英語(yǔ)滿分作文精選:
假設(shè)你叫王明,昨天收到了筆友David的e-mail,得知他不久要到北京來(lái)學(xué)習(xí)中文。他想了解如何學(xué)好中文。請(qǐng)你用英文給他回復(fù)一封e-mail,介紹學(xué)習(xí)中文的體會(huì)和方法,提出你的建議,以及表達(dá)你幫助他學(xué)好中文的愿望。
【滿分例文】
Dear David,
I'm glad you'll come to Beijing to learn Chinese. Chinese is very useful, and many foreigners are learning it now. It's difficult for you because it's quite different from English. You have to remember as many Chinese words as possible. It's also important to do some reading and writing. You can watch TV and listen to the radio to practise your listening. Do your best to talk with people in Chinese. You can learn Chinese not only from books but also from people around you. If you have any questions, please ask me. I'm sure you'll learn Chinese well.
Hope to see you soon in Beijing.
Yours,
Wang Ming
【范文翻譯】
親愛(ài)的大衛(wèi),
我很高興你會(huì)來(lái)北京學(xué)習(xí)中文。中國(guó)是非常有益的,許多外國(guó)人正在學(xué)習(xí),現(xiàn)在。這很難為你,因?yàn)樗窍喈?dāng)?shù)挠⒄Z(yǔ)不同。你要記住盡可能多的中國(guó)話。同樣重要的是做一些閱讀和寫(xiě)作。你可以看電視,聽(tīng)廣播練習(xí)你的聽(tīng)力。你最好不要談?wù)撆c中國(guó)人民。你可以學(xué)習(xí)漢語(yǔ),不僅從書(shū)本上,而且從你周?chē)娜?。如果您有任何?wèn)題,請(qǐng)問(wèn)我。我敢肯定你會(huì)學(xué)好中文。
希望能盡快看到你在北京。
此致,
王明