When it comes to success, different people have different opinions about what makes it come true. Some people regard hard-working as an essential quality to success while others believe being clever would lead to success. From my point of view, I think perseverance and hard-working are indispensable for those who want to make an achievement.

　　談到成功時(shí)，對于實(shí)現(xiàn)成功的原因不同的人有不同的看法。有些人認(rèn)為勤奮是成功必備的素質(zhì)，而另一些人則相信聰明人會(huì)實(shí)現(xiàn)成功。從我的角度來看，我認(rèn)為毅力和勤奮對于那些想要成功的人是必不可少的。

　　Firstly, perseverance let people step closely towards success. Most people want to make a big difference to prove their value. People who set their goal and keep moving would make their dream come true. However, there are some people who set their goal but they stop at the difficulty would fail in the end. I think the difference between success and failure is perseverance. If we have perseverance, even if we are not clever, we will make a great difference, but if we not, we are doomed to lose. As we all know, Edison is a great inventor in the world. However, before he invented the bulb, he kept trying for tens of thousands of times to find a suitable wire. Let us imagine, if he gave up at the 999th, then how he couldn’t become so successful. So, I strongly believe that perseverance produces success.

　　首先，毅力讓人離成功越來越近。大多數(shù)人都想用不同的方式證明自己的價(jià)值。設(shè)定自己的目標(biāo)，向著目標(biāo)走，就可以使夢想成真了。然而，有些人設(shè)立了目標(biāo)，卻在困難面前妥協(xié)了將以失敗告終。我認(rèn)為成功與失敗之間的差別是毅力。如果我們有毅力，即使我們不聰明，我們也會(huì)有很大的不同，但是如果我們沒有毅力，我們注定是要失敗的。我們都知道，愛迪生是一位偉大的發(fā)明家。但是，在他發(fā)明電燈泡前，他試了為數(shù)千次去找一個(gè)合適的線。讓我們想象一下，如果他在第九百九十九次放棄了，那么他就不可能變得如此成功。因此，我強(qiáng)烈認(rèn)為，堅(jiān)持就會(huì)成功。

　　Secondly, there is also a kind of people who are born with cleverness, I think they are lucky. Nevertheless, if they don’t make a hard work on their way to their goal, they, absolutely, will become loser. Whether we are gifted for intelligent, we must be hard-working so as to success. I regard hard-working as an efficient approach to be successful because I believe ‘pains and gains’. As for those who do not make great efforts on work, failure follows.

　　In old times, there is a clever boy who can make excellent poem when he can talk. When his father found the little child’s cleverness, he just let the child make poems to show around while never let the boy learned anything. When the boy grew up, people forgot him because he lost the ability to compose poems and became ordinary as others. From this matter, we can see that only by hard-working can we get knowledge and make a good future.

　　其次，還有一種人是天生聰明的，他們是幸運(yùn)的。然而，如果他們沒有在實(shí)現(xiàn)目標(biāo)之前努力工作，他們當(dāng)然也會(huì)成為失敗者。無論我們是否有天資，我們都應(yīng)該努力工作以獲得成功。我認(rèn)為勤奮是成功的一個(gè)有效的方法，因?yàn)槲蚁嘈诺?ldquo;付出和收獲”。對于那些不努力工作的人最后是失敗的了。在古代，有一個(gè)聰明的男孩，在他能說話的時(shí)候就可以作優(yōu)秀的詩歌。當(dāng)他的父親發(fā)現(xiàn)他孩子的聰明時(shí)，他只是讓孩子到處作詩歌來炫耀，卻從不讓他兒子學(xué)習(xí)別的知識(shí)。孩子長大后，人們把他遺忘了，因?yàn)樗チ藙?chuàng)作能力，成為了普通人。從這件事中，我們可以看到，只有通過努力工作才能獲得知識(shí)，擁有一個(gè)好的未來。

　　Anyway, I think perseverance and hard-working are both important in our way to success for they enhance us and produce success.

　　不管怎么樣，我覺得毅力和勤奮在成功路上都是很重要的，因?yàn)樗麄兲嵘覀儾@得成功。