初中英語(yǔ)作文點(diǎn)評(píng)

　　英語(yǔ)作文一直是中學(xué)英語(yǔ)教學(xué)的薄弱環(huán)節(jié),如果教師對(duì)于學(xué)生的引導(dǎo)不到位,就會(huì)出現(xiàn)閱讀教學(xué)的讀、寫分離現(xiàn)象。下面，是學(xué)習(xí)啦小編為你整理的初中英語(yǔ)作文點(diǎn)評(píng)，希望對(duì)你有幫助!

　　初中英語(yǔ)作文點(diǎn)評(píng)篇1

　　Last saturday ,my family kewn knew (the news that)i I won (the) English competitionnews . inIn order to cerebrate i had won English competition(it)., my parents decided to go to (a) nearbourhood club play on this sunday .weWe were very happiedhappy andlooked forwardto playing.looking forward to it.

　　InOn that day ,we were gegot up (very) early and eathad breakfast (quickly). Then we walked to (the) club slowly ,and chated each other .on our way to (the) club ,we talked ourselvswith each other very happyhappliy. Quickly Soon,we arrived (at the) club . this club had all sorts of palyWe can do a lot of things and enjoy ourselves in this club.such as sportdoing some sports ,amusement ,study and so onand studying .Look!when my parents went to read room ,they going to read. My parents were going to the reading room to do some reading. Grandma was talkedtalking to (some) other olderold people abortabout they lifelives,.(My) sisters playedwere playing badminton happily....what i didWhat did I do? I went to play computer games .we didn'tcamecome back until we palyedwere tired .What a happy day!

　　點(diǎn)評(píng)：

　　1、句首一定要大寫，要注意一些拼寫錯(cuò)誤。

　　2、全文的時(shí)態(tài)一定要保持一致，如果是過(guò)去時(shí)就全部用過(guò)去時(shí)。

　　3、語(yǔ)法掌握得還是不太夠。如：動(dòng)詞要用副詞來(lái)修飾，系動(dòng)詞后要接形容詞，such as前不用逗號(hào)隔開(kāi)等等

　　4、該同學(xué)努力嘗試描寫清楚一件事情，這種態(tài)度很好，堅(jiān)持下去，多練練，會(huì)有收獲的。

　　初中英語(yǔ)作文點(diǎn)評(píng)篇2

　　(Nowadays,) English is most widely used in the world,. It's very important，(b)But most of us have difficulty in learning it. If you have difficulty in English. (feel that it is not that easy to learn English well,) Here is some advice.

　　1. (Firstly,/First of all,) Listening (listen to) English songs,(and) watch English movies.

　　2. (Secondly,) Reading a passage (read some English passages),(t)Then try to retell it (them) (by) yourself.we(We) should speak English with our teachers,classmates an(and) even with foreigners as often as possible.

　　3. (Thirdly)You (you) can read the English paper or a magazine(s).such as Chain(China) Daily.

　　4. (Forthly) Keeping (keeping) a diary is a good way to practice your (English) writing.

　　5. (Last but not least,) If you can’t remember new words，you can copy them (write them down) onprices ( a piece) of paper. (then) stick them (it) on the walls in your room.

　　In a word. (All in all,) If you can keep on learning English and never give up, I'm sure your

　　English will become (be) better and better!

　　點(diǎn)評(píng)：

　　1、三段式的寫作結(jié)構(gòu)很好，清晰了然。

　　2、注意只有句首的首字母才需要大寫。

　　3、舉例或羅列時(shí)，最好不要用阿拉伯?dāng)?shù)字1、2、3……。要用英語(yǔ)寫，我已經(jīng)在文中修改過(guò)了。

　　4、總體來(lái)說(shuō)，句子結(jié)構(gòu)相對(duì)簡(jiǎn)單，可以嘗試用一兩句從句，這樣文章會(huì)增彩不少。

　　初中英語(yǔ)作文點(diǎn)評(píng)篇3

　　Hu Yue is my new friend，In our class, she likes singing and she can sing very well.

　　She's 1.60meters tall. she has blank hair and wears school uniform.She is very lovely and pretty. She likes eating hamburger, vegetable and peanuts and dislikes fishesfish, green tea and sweets,She also loves listening to music,reading and writing. Her favorite hobby is drawing. because she likes all the different colors,She is really great!

　　點(diǎn)評(píng)：本文基本沒(méi)有語(yǔ)法錯(cuò)誤，但是篇幅太短，信息傳遞不夠全面，同時(shí)沒(méi)有出彩的短語(yǔ)結(jié)構(gòu)，可以在這幾方面再進(jìn)行提升。

　　1) 寫此類主題的作文可以不用分段

　　2)如能善用連接詞會(huì)更好，比如在描寫興趣愛(ài)好的時(shí)候可以用“…but……”“not only…but also…”等等